Monthly Archives: November 2009
Learning more about Story Structure
As I’ve mentioned before, one of the areas in which I struggle is structure — specifically at the scene level. For a long time, I didn’t know how to determine whether a scene was advancing the plot or not. But …
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Will Equal Rights Issues Date My Fiction?
Change is happening. Slowly. Often with two steps forward, one step back. Sometimes two steps back. Much of New England allows for marriage equality, even though Maine then pulled a “Prop 8″ and voted it out. But the issue is …
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Priming the Writing Pump
When it comes to writing a novel, there are “outliners” and there are “discovery writers”. “Outliners” create a detailed outline of scenes before beginning the first draft. “Discovery writers” prefer to work without an outline and may or may not …
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Making Changes Mid-draft
When I wrote the original draft of The Skinless Girl two years ago (it was during Nanowrimo and was titled A Sense of Community back then), I wrote it in third person limited. After letting it rest for a few …
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Stories in Motion
I just mailed off my short story Waffle Shoe Wake to The Georgia Review. It’s always an exciting thing to do. Lots of expectations and hopes, tempered with the reality that I face a lot of competition. There’s a part …
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